[identity profile] puddingcat.livejournal.com 2004-10-03 08:14 am (UTC)(link)
Nicely written :) You and your upright behemoths; do any of your characters not have a genital fixation?

Best of luck with the results, too :)

[identity profile] davywavy.livejournal.com 2004-10-03 08:22 am (UTC)(link)
For some reason the phrase 'upright behemoth' just seems so appropriate when applied to me.

[identity profile] puddingcat.livejournal.com 2004-10-03 09:45 am (UTC)(link)
Better than "uptight behemoth" :p